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:iconkozatoenma: :iconsaysplz: "Haru.....
:iconmiuraharuplz: :iconsaysplz: "What is it?"
:iconkozatoenma: :iconsaysplz: *CHU*
:iconkozatoenma: :iconsaysplz: "Love u :)"
:iconmiuraharuplz: :iconsaysplz: "*Speechless* :iconblushplz:

Kind of lazy today and so I made a small comic about Enma and Haru. Hope you like it though. :D

Enma Cozart & Miura Haru Amano Akira
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:iconlucid72:
Lucid72 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Oh Haru-chan, if you love Tsuna THAT much. YOU SHOULDN'T KISS MY ENMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!the hell? Kyou Fujibayashi (Do that and you die) [V2] Sakura (Creeped) [V1] 
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Tawalisi Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014
he's not yours. he's mine. XD
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:iconlucid72:
Lucid72 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014
No. Mine... My Adorable loveable enma!
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animefanxlove Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
i like both but HARU GET AWAY FROM MY ENMA OR I WILL BITE YOU TO DEATH
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TheMelodyHeldWithin Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
WWWAAHHH! I LOVE ENMA X HARU!! I love editing mmv's with them! XD Cute comic!! I want moreeeee!! 'O'
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hazwanioo8 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
yeahhhhhhhhhhhhh enma and haru kawaiiii
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:iconriyuu-chan:
RiYuu-chan Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Student Artist
:iconnosebleedplz: YEAHHHHHHHHHH!!! ENMAXHARU!!!
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:iconxxdevilsangel28xx:
xxDevilsAngel28xx Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:XD:
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RiYuu-chan Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Student Artist
:iconblushingplz:
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Roloko Featured By Owner May 22, 2012
OMG YESSSSS

0086. <3
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xxDevilsAngel28xx Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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MadameDezzyB Featured By Owner May 20, 2012
I'm throwing up rainbows, this is so cute.
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xxDevilsAngel28xx Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D
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Locket-cha Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
That's too cute~! :) Short but sweet!
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xxDevilsAngel28xx Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D
I know what you mean :XD:
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HotoriAmu Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
Aww~~ Enma, you can have Haru x3 :meow:
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Lavender-skies Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG. that is a pairing I never even thought of XDD ILU SO MUCH ><
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xxDevilsAngel28xx Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe...many thought so, too. Thanks :D
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Lavender-skies Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
<3~ You might have inspired some sort of fanfiction~~ <3
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xxDevilsAngel28xx Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope so :D
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:iconlavender-skies:
Lavender-skies Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes. Yes <3
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Kira-Schiffer Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awwww so cute i dont know but i love this ship :# sorry my bad english
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xxDevilsAngel28xx Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's okay. Thanks a lot :D
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Fasak Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
Awesome:meow:
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Yuminari Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Student
kawaiii :D
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Nuren96 Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
So cute ^__^
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:iconakidemi:
AkiDemi Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
aww~~ hooray for emnaxharu!!xD may i know your views on tsunaxharu?:)
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xxDevilsAngel28xx Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hhhmmmm..... I would say...I like them too. Tsuna, for me, is a little bit ahead from Enma.
But mostly I like him in his TYL and HDWM
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AkiDemi Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
hehe i see!xD hehe i have a hard time deciding which is better,tsunaxharu or enmaxharu xD i just came to the conclusion of tsunaxkyoko instead and enmaxharu xP
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xxDevilsAngel28xx Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I thought that once, too. When I did my first fanart of Enma x Haru and reading the manga with the first appearnce of the Simon Famiglia.
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AkiDemi Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
hehe now thanks to you i really love enma and haru!xD
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Neospice12 Featured By Owner May 15, 2012
MMMM, not like, LOVE it.

AHHH wonderful works like this make me wanna get crackin' on my writing. UGH I was hit with the lazy attack once again. /cries
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xxDevilsAngel28xx Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha....Thanks.
Oh yeah, I've read your latest work and as always....GREAT work :D
That's our only problem. LAZINESS...haha
I'm trying to write a story, too, in FF net. I don't know, maybe you could read it and give some pointers on how to write a great story?
My acct name there is springrain28. I only have 2 stories there yet maybe I'll add more.
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Neospice12 Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
Welcome.

Ha ha thank you very much. I'm glad that you like them.

MMM yes. It's horrible. Laziness really hits me hard at times.

Oh, is that so? How interesting. I can try to read it and see how I can help. ^^ I don't know how much help I can be, but I'll read the story that you are currently working on then.
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xxDevilsAngel28xx Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks again. That'll be a great help :)
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:iconneospice12:
Neospice12 Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
Welcome.

So, I read all 6 chapters of your story. So what exactly do you want help with in terms of writing? Like helping with the plot? Helping with writing in general?
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xxDevilsAngel28xx Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hhmmm... I think writing in general would be much helpful for me right now.
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Neospice12 Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
Well for one thing, it's always useful to plan some things out in advance and work your way towards it slowly. Sometimes if you make things move too quickly, the story may seem a bit too rushed.

I have a bit of trouble with that myself. Another thing I've noticed is that you have too much dialogue right after one another. You should try to put in more description sentences to separate them. This way the flow of the story moves better.

Again, I also have this problem. I've been trying to fix this problem slowly over the years and over my works.

One thing that I've noticed is that you make the characters seem to really like Haru a lot. Like in the first chapter, I was a bit surprised with how Hibari acted. I feel if Haru was taken he would be a bit more subtle about the way he felt. Gokudera is very loyal to Tsuna. He wouldn't do anything like trying to steal his woman.

So with the question he asked and all that, it just made me think. Not saying it's wrong though! Of course you are very free to write what you want.

Just thought I'd give you the suggestion that you should have a bit more 2786 scenes. The way the story is progressing is that Haru doesn't love Tsuna at all, and Tsuna is never around. So this is now a case of Haru trying to find someone else to love.

Sounds a bit scandalous. (If you want that kind of a story then go for it, you're setting up the story quite nicely) If you want the story to be of how Haru is torn whether to be loyal to her lover or to find someone else, you should have more 2786 scenes. This way, she can realize why she loves Tsuna. She wants to be loyal to him.

These scenes will return the flow to the story. Then when you feel like it, you can have the other guardians slowly warm up to her. With this, Haru will slowly get confused over who she loves more. Tsuna will then get a bit suspicious of relationships and yada yada, you can think of that for yourself. 8)

So, don't be afraid to have some chapters that don't show any relationship development at all. Some chapters that have more of an everyday feel work nicelyh as well. If a story is too full of romantic developments, it may make the story seem like it's going too quickly. Some people like that and some others don't.

Depending on what you like, write however you feel like.

If you have any specific questions, feel free to ask and I will do my best. Though remember, I'm not a professional writer or anything so what I say is NOT law. Just do what you think is right. ^^
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xxDevilsAngel28xx Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow that was fast and really long, too.

Okay let me summarize my answers......
First,that's what I thought when I wrote it but then again i finished it like that. I'll try to elaborate more of what's happening in the latest chapters.

Oh, don't worry about that. I have lots more of 2786 moments after, I think 1 more chapter. There, I'll explain about them and why Tsuna always having excuses. I already have the ending of this story. It's kind of sad though.

That sounds great. I think I'll do that.
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kieruchi Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
awwwwwwwww
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2flame2 Featured By Owner May 15, 2012
very cute
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